• Infinity War: Spectacle Through Character

    Like around 90% of western civilization, I recently went to see Avengers: Infinity War. And like most fans of the Marvel Cinematic Universe, I loved the sheer spectacle of it. Creating something this huge with so many big-name stars is a staggering achievement. That the Russo brothers created something so entertaining just adds to the joy of the moment.

    Thinking back on this film, and on the others that have led up to it, I realised how basic the secret to their success is. The heart fo this franchise, the thing that keeps me coming back time after time, is one of the most basic elements of storytelling.

    It’s good characters.

    Don’t get me wrong, I love the spectacle and the humour. I enjoy seeing a universe emerge through a web of interconnected films. The all-star casts really help. But what sucks me in is how well the characters are depicted. Each one is interesting and unique in their own right. Their relationships with each other are rich and believable. Some of them having cracking character arcs, especially Steve Rogers, whose journey of growth has been truly compelling.

    Sure, I have an interest in superheroes, but as DC have proved, that’s not enough to drag me to the cinema. What Marvel is doing right, and what we can all learn from as storytellers, is a focus on the fundamentals.

    I don’t go to Marvel movies for the spectacle anymore. I go for the characters. The spectacle has become the bonus feature.

  • Lines in the Rock – a science fiction flash story

    My nerves were frayed even before they sent me to supervise Ruby. There had been lots of setbacks in terraforming my sector, and the finger of blame was slowly shifting my way. I was struggling to sleep, which led to mistakes, which made both the stress and the insomnia worse. And then the chief engineer assigned me the project’s most infamous technician.

    “I’ve got it all planned out,” Ruby said, waving a tablet in front of my face.

    I snatched the tablet and peered at the screen, looking for something amiss. It showed a diagram of the landscape beneath our hovering depot, with symbols mapping out Ruby’s plan. As far as I could see, there were none of the smiley faces or penis shapes she was infamous for carving into the landscape. But I wasn’t going to be fooled so easily.

    I muted layers of the diagram, viewing different features one at a time. Still nothing amiss.

    “This is good work,” I admitted. “You’re a fast designer.”

    “I remodelled some of the hills here during phase one,” she said, smiling. “Knowing the lay of the land always helps.”

    I restored the diagram on the tablet, then zoomed out for one last look.

    “Gotcha.” I pointed at a curved area being prepared for forests. “You’ve left underlying rock in the middle. The trees won’t grow there, and we both know how it will look.”

    “Oh, come on,” Ruby said. “Everybody loves tits.”

    “No. You clear out that underlying rock. Then you can plant the forest.”

    “Fine.” She rolled her eyes, still grinning. “Is that all?”

    A terrible suspicion stole over me.

    “I need time to study this before we start work,” I said.

    “But we’re already behind schedule,” she said.

    Just hearing those words made me twitch.

    “Fine. There’s a hill they want reduced to rock flats. You do that.”

    “Yes, boss.”

    I sat scowling in a corner while Ruby steered the depot through the skies. As she got us into place over the hill, I was still scrutinising her plan, redesigning anything that looked even faintly phallic. As she fired up the laser scouring beams, and the air filled with the crackle of disintegrating rock, I started peering suspiciously at anything vaguely round.

    As I worked, my foot tapped against the floor, a frantic rhythm growing of its own accord. I couldn’t spare time for this nonsense, but I couldn’t let her sneak something crude through either. My job was on the line.

    With a boom, the last of the hilltop disappeared. I looked up at a monitor, watching dust settled over the newly flattened ground.

    My mouth hung open at the horror of what I saw.

    “How?” I squeezed out the word, little more than a strangled croak.

    The rock the flats had been carved from came in two colours. They should have been mixed in swirls and broken splotches, as laid down during phase one. Instead, a gleaming image of a naked man, made entirely from the paler rock, stood out against a dark background.

    I flung the tablet aside and ran to the rear hatch. A hot wind full of dust made me choke. Even through streaming eyes, the rocks looked the same – indecency on a planetary scale.

    I gripped the edge of the hatch so hard my fingers hurt.

    “How?” This time I screamed the word.

    Ruby appeared at my side, grinning that same smug, idiot grin.

    “I laid down those hills, back in phase one,” she said. “At last, they’re paying off.”

    “We have to change it,” I said. “Now! Before anyone sees.”

    “We’re already behind schedule. Does this really matter more than finishing the job?”

    I stared at the rock flats and contemplated the ruin of my career. Hysterical laughter bubbled up from inside me.

    That sound shook something else loose. For the first time in weeks, my jaw unclenched and my shoulders slumped to a natural rest. The laughter became joyful as I finally relaxed and appreciated the effort Ruby put into her craft.

    “Leave it,” I said at last, wiping tears from my eyes. “They’ll fire me either way. We might as well have something fun to show for it.”

    “They won’t fire you,” Ruby said. “They’re behind schedule, remember? They need every hand they’ve got. Why do you think they haven’t fired me?”

    From that moment on, our approach to terraforming changed.

    Years later, I went back to that sector as a tourist. I marvelled at the porn studios and pagan temples that had sprung up around our rock formation. I lay in the shadow of the smiley face woods. I listened to the laughter of people who lived here just because of the stupid shapes we made.

    I felt happy knowing that they’d named it Rubytown.

    * * *


    I’ve been playing a lot of Terraforming Mars this year. Sooner or later, it was bound to show here.

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  • New Version of Guns and Guano

    A new, revised version of my novella Guns and Guano is now available for free at a multitude of e-book stores. This rewrite doesn’t substantially change the story, but is still something I’ve wanted to do for a while. I’ve tidied up some of the prose and tried to subtly improve the way the character of Isabelle is presented. The place of women in Victorian society is an important issue in this series, and this story in isolation wasn’t dealing with that the way I wanted it too. The result of the changes is far from perfect, but it sets the tone better than I could a few years ago.

    Guns and Guano is a tale of action, adventure, and strange events on an Atlantic island. It’s about dealing with the past and looking to the future. There are gangsters, conspirators, and a chisel-jawed hero punching a shark. Honestly, what more could you want? Go get a copy, you know you want to.

  • Those Who Lay Hidden – a flash fantasy story

    Tam heaved another shovelful of coal from the great heaps of the engine room into the roaring flames. Muscles strained beneath skin scarred by fire, like that of so many of the other boiler men. They all moved like automatons, keeping to the steady rhythm of their work. The fires had to be stoked, the ship kept moving as they steamed towards war.

    Suddenly, the fire flared. Blue-green flames burst from the roaring red depths. The boiler men flung up their arms and leapt back in alarm.

    All except Tam. He let that brief flash of flame wash across deadened skin, singeing his hair and beard. Decades of feeding fires in the darkness had bred a toughness few could match. He had seen men burned alive or scalded to death when the hull split and water hit the boiler. He had seen the worst that the Steam Wars had to offer.

    Still, a shudder ran down his spine.

    The flames coalesced into a monstrous shape of jagged teeth, writhing tentacles, and blazing eyes. Its mouth opened and the sounds that emerged were not human, yet Tam understood them.

    “I am Lokras the Destroyer,” the creature roared, the heat of its breath scorching the hairs from Tam’s arms. Embers fell glowing from its jaws. “Down long eons have I lain beneath the earth, locked in darkness with all that remains of the forests that were my empire. At last I am free, and this world will again be mine. Bow before me, puny creatures!”

    Around the engine room, men sank to their knees, trembling in terror.

    But though he shook, Tam held his ground.

    “I ain’t afraid of you,” he lied, folding his arms.

    “You dare to challenge me?” The creature swept towards him, a tide of fire and rage. “I will burn you to ashes and devour your soul.”

    “You think you’re the first ancient spirit I’ve seen unleashed?” Tam forced a laugh. “I was on the Colossus, the pride of the fleet. Folks said it was a mystery how she sank, but I know. I was there when Blind Gorash burst from the coal and demanded our service. Only I survived, but I remember.”

    The spirit hesitated, then rose up, looming over Tam.

    “If Gorash had emerged, I would sense him,” it said. “We were foes in the Killing Time. Our fates are bound. Now get onto your knees or be destroyed!”

    “That’s pretty much what Gorash said.” Still carrying his shovel, Tam walked across the room, not knowing if he might be turned to charcoal at any moment. So much hung on what sort of creature this Lokras was. His only hope was to be bold.

    On the wall was a pipe with a tightly sealed valve. Tam stopped beside it.

    “When Captain Flynn said she wouldn’t bow down, Gorash sank the ship,” he continued. “Lost with all hands, Colossus was. Well, all hands but me.”

    “Lies! Gorash is great and powerful.”

    “Aye, yes. But like you, Gorash came back made of flame. What do you think happens to a fire creature when its ship sinks?”
    He thrust the handle of his shovel through the valve’s handle and heaved. There was a squeal of resistance, then water ran across the deck. The embers falling from Lokras hissed out as they hit it.

    “What then?” Lokras growled. “You will destroy me, sacrificing yourself and your shipmates for the good of all humanity?”

    “Oh no,” Tam said. He pulled his sleeve up his shoulder, revealing a scar in the shape of a blinded eye. “How do you think I survived Blind Gorash and the Colossus? I want to make a deal.”

    “And your shipmates? Your leaders?”

    “Sod them. They’ve had me shovelling coal for forty years.” Tam gestured to the other boiler men, who hesitantly rose to their feet, their expressions ranging from confusion to excitement. “We’re ready to make a deal. But you’d better offer us something good, and offer it fast.” With an arm grown weary with age, he swung his shovel, tapping it against the water valve. “Time ain’t on either of our sides.”

    As Lokras opened its mouth to plead, the boiler kept burning and the ship kept moving, steaming towards war.

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    That’s two engine rooms in two weeks. Don’t worry, I’ll move on next week.

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  • Good Bye Lenin and the Nature of History

    On the surface, the 2003 film Good Bye, Lenin! seems like a simple piece of absurdity. During the late days of the Cold War, East German Christiane falls into a coma, only to awake after the fall of the Berlin Wall. Her son Alex, believing that the shock of the fall of communism will kill her, decides to hide the truth. He creates a fiction around her, an imaginary Germany in which communism has triumphed. To protect his mother, he reinvents history. So far, so ridiculous.

    But as I watched the film, I was struck by the commentary this offers on real history. History isn’t a straightforward view of reality. It’s something we create with a purpose. Part of that purpose is to understand the past, but we usually have other motives too. Whether we’re seeking entertainment, making a political argument, or trying to keep mum from slipping back into a coma, our reasons for exploring history give it form. Most of the time, we don’t deliberately try to deceive, but our motives and interests filter what we see. If you want to be entertained, you see the action and daring of war, not the civilian casualties. If you want to prove that Britain is a standalone powerhouse, you see the British RAF and not the Eastern European pilots who were part of its squadrons in the Second World War.

    Like Alex, we create a history that suits us.

    Sure, some people are more blatant about this than others. The way Donald Trump constantly reinvents the recent past, starkly filtering out his own inconvenient statements, is particularly glaring.  But there’s a spectrum of behaviour here, from Alex’s deliberate deception to Trump’s narcissistic denial to more mundane bias.

    I know I bang on about this a lot, but history isn’t a window into the past. It’s our relationship with it. Like Alex, we can go to extraordinary lengths to see the past we want to see. But unlike him, we’re seldom aware of the deceptions we create. And sometimes, other people’s deceptions catch up with us.

    Try to remember that, next time you cite history to make a point. How far has your purpose shaped what you’re seeing? And what have you left out in the rush to see a history that suits you?

  • The Hell of Fire and Water – a flash steampunk story

    The boiler room was Haruto’s own hell. Stifling air blazed with the heat of the furnace, whose fires somehow failed to light up the windowless room. Coal dust formed a thick, black mud in the sweat pouring across his skin. The crunch of shovels in the coal echoed around the chamber, a rhythmless percussion accompanying the engine’s roar and the distant thud of the ship’s guns.

    The ship shook and a deep boom briefly eclipsed all other sounds. White eyes flashed in the darkness as the shovel men stared at each other, then at the walls around them.

    Haruto’s finger trembled as he pointed at water spraying between the steel plates. Even as he watched, horrified, a rivet burst off and clanged against the opposite wall.

    An emergency repair team rushed into the boiler room. As engineers tried to force wooden wedges into the gap, their officer turned to the shovel men.

    “Keep working!” he shouted. “We have to keep moving.”

    “Are we sinking?” Haruto asked, unable to tear his gaze from the water spreading across the floor.

    “Keep shovelling!” The officer, eyes wide, pointed a pistol at them. “Half the lifeboats were lost. We have to try to reach land.”

    Haruto shovelled with a new urgency, flinging coal into the fires of the boiler, giving the engines all the power he could.

    As he shovelled, the water rose. The engineers had plugged one gap, but another had appeared, larger this time. The ship was listing to port, towards that gap in the hull. Even as the engineers hammered plates and wedges into place, the water crept up around them and the nearest shovel men.

    There was another boom. The ship rocked as if hit by a vast wave. Water sloshed over the edge of the furnace. A man screamed as steam burned the skin from his flesh and left him writhing on the ground.

    With aching arms, Haruto found a fresh burst of speed, flinging the coal in ever faster. But his attention wasn’t on the furnace. He was imagining what would happen if more water hit the blazing fires, how quickly it would fill the whole room with a fiery cloud of death.

    He glanced around, judging which was the closest way out without running past the officer or through the rising water. He wasn’t going to wait around for a hideous death. Better to get over the side and risk swimming for safety.

    The ship rocked again as another shell hit nearby. The deck tilted and a wave rushed across the room. Haruto flung himself down in the coal.

    Steam shot past where he had been, hissing like a thousand deadly snakes. It caught the back of his arm. Pain flashed along his nerves, making him scream.

    Reeling in agony, he stumbled upright. The other shovel men were still at work. So were the engineers, frantically trying to seal a breach that sprang wider every time they were almost done. The officer was among them now, holding up a sheet of metal for

    others to weld into place.
    This was Haruto’s chance. He just had to run. It was that or suffer his arm’s excruciating pain a thousand times over, his whole body blazing with that horror. The repair men had bought him enough time to get out. He should take it.

    He laid the shovel down on the coals and looked for the nearest exit. He could see others doing the same.

    Water burst suddenly from a new hole, knocking an engineer down. His head hit the deck with a clang. Somehow, he pulled himself to his feet, shook it off, and got back to work.

    Haruto imagined the waves rising over the edge of the boiler, filling the whole room with steam, killing that brave man as he struggled to keep others alive. He imagined the ship tearing itself open as the boiler blew apart. He imagined his crewmates sucked beneath the waves.

    Haruto picked up his shovel. The boiler room was already his hell. He couldn’t let it take other lives too.

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  • Hunting Vampires and Riding Elephants

    I recently took a trip to the Royal Armouries in Leeds. It turns out that they have more than historical weapons…

    Jousters practising for an international tournament. People were coming from Australia to knock each other off horses. Got to love that level of enthusiasm for history.
    For when a horse isn’t badass enough.
    Things start getting weird. This museum has a vampire slaying kit.
    They’re also ready to fight aliens.

  • Blood on the Beach – a flash historical story

    By Archives New Zealand from New Zealand – Landing at Gallipoli, CC BY-SA 2.0

    We pulled hard at the oars, twenty of us rowing in unison, pushing our boat as fast as we could towards the shore. We wanted to be off the water and on dry ground, where we could fire back at the Turks on the cliffs. But more than that, we were excited to join the fight. The Great War had come, and we were keen to play our part.

    With a crunch and a lurch, the boat hit ground. We let go of the oars and grabbed our rifles, leaping out into the shallows. Water filled my boots and soaked me to the thighs.

    Billy grinned as he leapt into the water beside me.

    “Last one up the beach digs the latrines!” he shouted before heading off at a run.

    I followed eagerly, just as I’d followed him into schoolyard skirmishes and into the recruiting station when war came. We’d been lucky, just old enough to sign up. Now here we were, ready to stick it to the Turks.

    Our captain stumbled as he climbed out of the boat. Blood streamed from his arm and his gaze was caught on a body bobbing in the surf beside him. My stomach churned but I forced the bile back and raced on up the sand.

    Billy halfway up the beach when he suddenly spun around. I thought for a moment that he’d turned to urge me on. Then I saw the stain on his chest and the shock on his face. He fell sideways in the dirt.

    I rushed towards him, a scream bursting from my lungs. All around, men were dropping like flies – some dead, others scrabbling in the dirt to dig a safe place. More bullets tore through Billy’s body and the sand beneath. I dropped to the ground and pressed a hand against his wound, but it was too late.

    As I stared into my friend’s lifeless eyes, the guns thundered all around.


    “Private Hughes, isn’t it?”

    Captain Arundell approached along the sandy trench. He was the third commander we’d had since the landings. At least this one had the sense to keep his head down.

    “Yes, sir,” I said, delivering a weary salute.

    “I’m looking for volunteers for a raid on the Turkish lines,” he said. “They say that you’re a tough one, a survivor. I thought you might be a good choice.”

    I snorted. “I’m a survivor because I don’t volunteer, captain. There’s nothing here worth sticking my head above the trench line for.”

    “I have men who are keen to go,” Arundell said. “But they’re all new and inexperienced. Without some veterans to round out the team, they might not make it back.”

    “Then good luck to them,” I said.

    Arundell looked at me. We both knew he could order me to join. We both knew how well the rest of the men would view that sort of treatment, given what we’d already been through.

    He turned and headed away down the trench.


    I watched as the corpsmen carried Jones’s body off on a stretcher. He’d survived the landings and months on the beaches, only to succumb to a fever. He wasn’t the only one. Between disease and shelling, our safe positions felt more and more like a death trap.

    I huddled against the wall of the trench and prayed for deliverance.

    A private from the next platoon scurried along the trench. He paused as he reached me.

    “Have you heard?” he said. “We’re leaving.”

    I stared at him, hardly daring to believe.

    “When?” I asked.

    “After Christmas. They’re taking the ANZACs out first, then us.”

    His smile was so wide, his face still fresh and innocent, it reminded me of Billy. I felt a moment of warm nostalgia, then one of nausea as I remembered him lying bleeding on the sand.

    “Major Arundell’s looking for volunteers for the rear guard,” he continued. “We’re going to make sure the rest of you get out safely.”

    My stomach sank at the thought of leaving this kid to face the Turks. But what could I do? My prayers had been answered. We were getting out at last.


    The air stank of blood, cordite, and loose bowels. Even in the darkness of the night, I could make out the piles of bodies beyond our shell-shattered trenches, the remains of the last great Turkish assault.

    I finished setting my rifle in place, rigged up with a tangle of strings and slowly leaking cans. It was a messy device, but a functional one. It would pull the trigger at odd intervals after I was gone, creating the illusion that a soldier was still here. At least, that was the theory.

    The Turks had to know that we, the last few men standing, were about to leave. That was why they had launched the attack, to beat us while we were alone, before we could make our escape. And it was why we were still doing every last thing we could. Even if it only bought seconds, this still gave us a better chance of survival.

    “Good work,” Major Arundell whispered, patting me on the shoulder. He pointed down the beach to where the boats were waiting. “Now let’s get out of here.”

    As we grabbed the oars and set to rowing, I looked back at the cliffs of Gallipoli. I’d never been so glad to leave any place on Earth.

    And I’d never been so glad to be alive.

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    I have a comic out!

    “To Win Just Once” is a Commando comic, released yesterday in print and through Comixology. It’s about the experience of New Zealanders in the First World War. It deals with events on the Western Front, but references the Gallipoli campaign, and so this story is meant as a matching piece, showing what that campaign was like. If you want to read more about Gallipoli you could start with this article I wrote for War History Online.

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  • To Win Just Once – story notes

    German 77mm gun emplacement destroyed by New Zealand troops during the Battle of Messines, Belgium. Photograph taken by Henry Armytage Sanders in June, 1917.

    This Thursday, my first story for Commando Comics hits the newsstands and the Comixology app. I’m very proud of this story, titled “To Win Just Once”. I thought I’d put some notes here to give readers more information about the story.

    The Struggle

    The battle portrayed in this story is a real one. The assault on Messines Ridge was one of a series of battles fought around the town of Ypres. This was some of the most heavily contested territory of the war and the whole area was left devastated. You can read more about the battle in this article I wrote for War History Online.

    The British Army in the First World War wasn’t just made up of people from Britain. Soldiers from across the empire and former imperial territories fought for the British. Australia, Canada, and New Zealand sent thousands of men to Europe. The Canadians were so feared by the Germans that the British created bluffs about where they were being fielded. Men from the Australia and New Zealand Army Corps (ANZAC) fought in some of Britain’s most difficult campaigns, including the disaster at Gallipoli.

    One of the most dramatic details in this story is the explosion that destroys the German defences. This was also real. Engineers from the British Army dug twenty-one tunnels across no-man’s-land and filled the ends with a vast quantity of explosives. It’s the largest non-nuclear man-made explosion in history. Two of the mines didn’t go off, and those bombs remained buried to this day.

    The Soldiers

    While the battle was real, the characters are not. I made up every single one, from frustrated infantryman Jimmy Wilson to Captain Chandler, the disdainful English officer. That said, they are meant as realistic portrayals of the soldiers present and their experiences. ANZACs really did suffer through the Gallipoli fiasco only to end up on the front lines. British officers were mostly from privileged backgrounds, and the respect they showed for their men, especially from the colonies, varied hugely.

    I’ve based the general picture of the war on research I’ve done to write books and articles. Because of the bombardments, the area around Ypres was a hellish mess by 1917. The fighting was tough and brutal, bombardments heavy but ineffective. As a result, assaults were usually awful and futile for the attacking troops. Messines Ridge was one of the exceptions, as it was a success and the Germans suffered most of the awfulness.

    I was inspired to write this story by reading about Messines Ridge for War History Online, and by Commando’s call for pitches about the ANZACs. I’ve written more scripts for Commando since, and am about to start writing for WHO again, so watch out for more announcements here. You can also get notice about upcoming comics, along with free fiction, but signing up to my mailing list.

    The Song

    And to end on an upbeat note, the title for this story is taken from a Saw Doctors song. I saw the Saw Doctors play live when I was seventeen, and it was one of the liveliest, most entertaining gigs I’ve ever seen. This song, with its positive message about enduring and finding your win, will be in my head forever. That’s no bad thing.

  • Dreams and Dragon Sinew – a fantasy flash story

    Anna held her breath as she drew a dragon sinew from the jar. Slowly, carefully, she laid it into the groove she had cut in the ash rod. Only once she was sure that it was safely in place did she let herself relax and start considering the gold clasps that would complete the magic wand.

    The door opened and Master Bromhide strode in. The woman who followed him was as young as Anna and had a wild mass of black hair framing her face like a halo.

    “Anna, this is Helen, my other apprentice,” Bromhide said with a scowl. “Dealing with you separately has become too much work. Now you can sit together. Don’t let it distract you. I’ll know if the wands aren’t made right.”

    He walked back out, slamming the door behind him.

    Helen slung her bedding down in the corner of the room, then came to sit at the workbench.

    “How long have you been apprenticed to the old bastard?” she asked, testing the balance of an oak rod.

    Anna stared at her in shock and amazement. She would never have dared talk about Bromhide that way.

    “Three years,” she said.

    “Me too. Imagine the lengths he went to to keep us apart. What a control freak.” Helen glanced at Anna’s work. “Nice runes.”

    “Thank you.” A soft, tickling feeling filled Anna’s chest. “That’s, um, a good choice of wood.”

    “Wood’s never a good choice.” Helen sniggered and Anna looked at her in confusion. “Never mind.”

    Bromhide reappeared and flung two rolls of parchment down on the table.

    “This week’s orders, one list for each of you.” He picked up the wand that Anna had been working on. “What is this half-finished rubbish?” He smacked her across the back of her head, then did the same to Helen. “From now on, if one of you mucks up, you both get punished.”

    Then he stomped out, locking the door behind him.

    “I only just started,” Anna said, cradling the half-made wand in her hands.

    “Forget him.” Helen put an arm around her shoulders. Anna leaned in and felt some of her sadness float away. “Why don’t we work together?”

    “That would be more fun,” Anna said. “But are we allowed?”

    “Who’s going to know?” Helen unrolled one of the lists. “Let’s see what’s up first.”

    By the end of the day, two small stacks of completed wands sat on the end of the workbench. The apprentices alternated between working from each of their lists, making sure that they would each have something to show Bromhide. They talked and laughed as they worked, conjuring up dreams of running away to other cities where they could be wand makers in their own right. They described the grand houses they would live in, the noble clients they would serve, the fame they would earn. For the first time in three years, Anna’s workroom and home was a place of joy.

    The laughter stopped as a key turned in the lock. Each of them hunched over a half-made wand, serious expressions on their faces.

    Bromhide walked in. His habitual scowl eased a little as he looked at the pile of wands. But as he peered more closely, darkness descended.

    “I told you to each work on your own list,” he said.

    “We did,” Helen replied. “Look, we’ve each made some.”

    “This was on Anna’s list,” he said, picking up a slender ash stem wrapped around with unicorn hair and silver wire. “But you don’t tie them off this way. She does.”

    He pointed the wand at Helen and twitched the end. She gasped and fell convulsing to the floor.

    “Stop being so melodramatic,” Bromhide said. “Neither of you can make wands that powerful.”

    Anna stared in horror as her new friend writhed in pain. She had accepted so much cruelty over the years, telling herself she could bear it to learn her craft. Seeing someone else suffer was different.

    She grabbed one of the wands and pointed it at him.

    “Maybe we’re not that powerful on our own,” she said. “But together…”

    She twisted the wand in the air. Magic flowed from the ether, through the wand, and into the world. There was a sickening crunch as Bromhide’s arm bent back on itself. He screamed and his wand clattered on the floor.

    “I’ll see you both rot for this,” he bellowed.

    Anna stooped and helped Helen to her feet. The other girl was still shaking, but she was grinning too. She picked up the piles of wands.

    “You can’t punish us if you can’t catch us.” She turned Anna. “Would you like to run away to another city with me?”

    Smiling, Anna took her hand and led her out the door.

    Picture by Brenda Clarke via Flickr Creative Commons

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